Preparing
Like any child ,When my mom notified me that we were going camping that is the only thing that I have been mentioning to my mom all week. But then i realized that before we go camping we have to prepare for camping. I thought this prepare for my family to go camping would be a peice of cake but to my discomfurt it wasn't. It was actually a very complicated process. My family and I had to go to a verity of different stores, It was a tirering process. In my opinion the most easiest thing to go buy was food. The reason why is because my family shops at BJ'S so its easy for us to buy packages of food!! Preparing for camping isnt an easy process, But I bet that being there will be an easy process.
I never went camping but I bet when I do go its going to be magnifecent, so all of the had work that I did this week would pay off.
You are writing more and more and your voice as an author is really starting to develop! I love it!
ReplyDeleteCamping is a BLAST! I can't believe you haven't been before! I can't wait to read your next post about it (hopefully).
Keep in mind, you are writing a lot more which is amazing, but you still need to go back and reread what you write out loud before you post it. There are some phrases that you wrote that are different than how you would say them if you were speaking to me. Remember writing is just like having a conversation. Your goal is to get your reader (me) to understand what you are saying, just as if we were having a conversation.
Keep up the amazing work! I'm having a blast reading about your summer adventures!
I'm dying to hear how it went and I'm dying to read more posts! Get writing girlie! Hope your summer is going amazing!
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